The Christmas bells are ring as wish list are growing.Reseach proves that kids wish list get longer every year. In 2008 the average length of a Christmas list was half a page. Now 2 year later it’s rocked to 2 pages. As the wish list gets longer the prices get higher. Are Independent researcher has found that the price of a doll for a young girl has gone up 25% since 2008.This Christmas it might be easier to get presents for people as shops are going out of business. Last year shops were full with people buying Christmas present as early as October. But now in December just weeks away from Christmas shop are hardly filled with people.Why? You ask .This is because online shopping. People have turned to their computer to get there presents as it less hassle and they can do it in the comfort of their homes.
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